Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

Dear professor Sara,

How are you madam? I am John Doe and I was very upset when hearing you wanted to leave our local university after finding full-time job at another university. Actually I am wanting to thank you because of all things you teach us this semester.

First I am thankful to teach me and my classmates many things in math. When I was sitting in your classes time passed quickly because your teaching way was more interesting than other teachers. You were also different with other teachers because you always like to help us to learn deeply and not forget in future. Secondly, you were the only tutor caused me to like this subject from you and so I am very sad you are going forever. Finally I would be really happy to have communication with you with whatsapp or telegram application. I hope you become my teacher again. Thanks for all of the times with you have!

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

Dear Professor Sara,

I am writing this email to express my happiness about your new position at another university. But I am so sad to know you are leaving our local university forever.

Actually [I liked many things about your classes, especially the interest you always try to make in student. I am not forgetting the time you spend for all poor students to learn the subject best. Furthermore when you entered the class you were like hero comes to help us to learn. You even gave us extra chances to attend practical classes in the lab, even when it was hard to book time. In generally when I was in your classes I was not tired at all and like listen to the explaining to the end. I would be happy to stay in contact with you, Madam. We could use WhatsApp video calls each week, for example.

Thank you for your time and effort for all students.

Hope to see you soon.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 - 12 response

Dear Professor Sara,

I would like to express my heartfelt congratulations on your new position as a full-time professor at another university. While I am saddened by the news of your departure from our local university, I am genuinely thrilled for you and the exciting opportunities that lie ahead.

I wanted to take this chance to thank you for the incredible classes you taught this semester. Your passion for the subject matter was evident in every lecture of yours, and your dedication to our learning was truly inspiring. I especially appreciated how you made complex concepts easy and were always willing to answer questions.

As our time together comes to an end, I would like to request that we stay in touch if possible. Since your expertise and guidance have been valuable to me, and I will highly admire the chance to learn more from you in the future. Let me suggest a few ways to stay connected. Firstly, we could schedule occasional virtual meetings on the weekends. Secondly, I would be honored to continue learning from you in any way I can. I am strongly looking forward to hearing from you Madam.

With warm regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

I think have a dinner party is better than chocolate selling. Because having more benefits for the workplace fundraising project. Let me to explain the reasons.

At first, if the company have dinner party in local restaurant it can raise the money soon because it is 30$ for each guests while selling is 2$ and takes a long time to have $1000. Actually party process is giving money to restaurant but we are able to reach the budget faster for helping community. In other hand, for chocolate sells you have bought it first is itself money and makes the fundraising late. According the announcement we need it in two months. By the way the guests can invite and have fun in event more and it is good to make friends. It is incredible for relationship too.

Considering this reasons I think holding a dinner party is more effective than the another one. I am happy you give chance to me to write about my opinion in the issue. And I hope it is a great option for the workplace fundraising plan.

Again it is my opinion I am here supporting the company’ s decision.

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

Personally, I believe the first option that is selling chocolate bars for 2$ each to family members and friends is better because of some related reasons.

At first, if you think carefully, by choosing chocolate bars and selling them, we can easily make up the budget soon. Imagine all company’s members are doing this task. So how easy is it to satisfy the people buy the bars. Also, it doesn’t take effort to book a restaurant for holding a dinner party. You can make sure you are not spending extra money to fundraise for the workplace.

Secondly, by choosing to sell chocolate bars, you can feel relaxed because the company itself doesn’t need to spend another money for a restaurant to invite the guests. Since inviting needs invitation cards and some money involving for the book of place. And these are expensive nowadays.

Therefore, if you consider these reasons, you prefer have a chocolate to sell of holding a dinner party and raise money in this way.

Thank you for giving me the chance to describe my own idea about the project, and I will always support the workplace when needed.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

From my point of view, after considering both options carefully, I would like to help plan and host a dinner party rather than selling chocolate bars. Although selling chocolate seems convenient, I believe holding a dinner party with the charge of 30 $ per guest is more beneficial for the fundraising process due to some reasons.

Firstly, the occasion of party hosting allows for a more social and engaging experience. It provides an opportunity for colleagues, and family to come together and have fun in the company. Unlike selling bars, which is more of an individual task, a dinner party encourages interaction and fosters a sense of community. Moreover, it allows us to showcase our culinary and create a memorable event for all participants as well as a target to raise the budget. On the other hand, it has more potential to raise the amount needed in a shorter period of time. We are naturally able to approach the aim more efficiently by this project. It additionally helps us tap into a larger network of donors. Furthermore, as you all believe, this party organisation can easily support local businesses. By hosting the ceremony at a local restaurant, we will contribute to the community by boosting their revenue and promoting their services as well.

Considering these mentioned reasons, I am entirely confident that this action brings the benefit within the deadline for our workplace fundraising project. This is my personal opinion, and I will support whatever final decision is made.

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

Dear professor Sara,

How are you madam? I am John Doe and I was very upset when hearing you wanted to leave our local university after finding full-time job at another university. Actually I am wanting to thank you because of all things you teach us this semester.

First I am thankful to teach me and my classmates many things in math. When I was sitting in your classes time passed quickly because your teaching way was more interesting than other teachers. You were also different with other teachers because you always like to help us to learn deeply and not forget in future. Secondly, you were the only tutor caused me to like this subject from you and so I am very sad you are going forever. Finally I would be really happy to have communication with you with whatsapp or telegram application. I hope you become my teacher again. Thanks for all of the times with you have!

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

Dear Professor Sara,

I am writing this email to express my happiness about your new position at another university. But I am so sad to know you are leaving our local university forever.

Actually [I liked many things about your classes, especially the interest you always try to make in student. I am not forgetting the time you spend for all poor students to learn the subject best. Furthermore when you entered the class you were like hero comes to help us to learn. You even gave us extra chances to attend practical classes in the lab, even when it was hard to book time. In generally when I was in your classes I was not tired at all and like listen to the explaining to the end. I would be happy to stay in contact with you, Madam. We could use WhatsApp video calls each week, for example.

Thank you for your time and effort for all students.

Hope to see you soon.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 - 12 response

Dear Professor Sara,

I would like to express my heartfelt congratulations on your new position as a full-time professor at another university. While I am saddened by the news of your departure from our local university, I am genuinely thrilled for you and the exciting opportunities that lie ahead.

I wanted to take this chance to thank you for the incredible classes you taught this semester. Your passion for the subject matter was evident in every lecture of yours, and your dedication to our learning was truly inspiring. I especially appreciated how you made complex concepts easy and were always willing to answer questions.

As our time together comes to an end, I would like to request that we stay in touch if possible. Since your expertise and guidance have been valuable to me, and I will highly admire the chance to learn more from you in the future. Let me suggest a few ways to stay connected. Firstly, we could schedule occasional virtual meetings on the weekends. Secondly, I would be honored to continue learning from you in any way I can. I am strongly looking forward to hearing from you Madam.

With warm regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

I think have a dinner party is better than chocolate selling. Because having more benefits for the workplace fundraising project. Let me to explain the reasons.

At first, if the company have dinner party in local restaurant it can raise the money soon because it is 30$ for each guests while selling is 2$ and takes a long time to have $1000. Actually party process is giving money to restaurant but we are able to reach the budget faster for helping community. In other hand, for chocolate sells you have bought it first is itself money and makes the fundraising late. According the announcement we need it in two months. By the way the guests can invite and have fun in event more and it is good to make friends. It is incredible for relationship too.

Considering this reasons I think holding a dinner party is more effective than the another one. I am happy you give chance to me to write about my opinion in the issue. And I hope it is a great option for the workplace fundraising plan.

Again it is my opinion I am here supporting the company’ s decision.

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

Personally, I believe the first option that is selling chocolate bars for 2$ each to family members and friends is better because of some related reasons.

At first, if you think carefully, by choosing chocolate bars and selling them, we can easily make up the budget soon. Imagine all company’s members are doing this task. So how easy is it to satisfy the people buy the bars. Also, it doesn’t take effort to book a restaurant for holding a dinner party. You can make sure you are not spending extra money to fundraise for the workplace.

Secondly, by choosing to sell chocolate bars, you can feel relaxed because the company itself doesn’t need to spend another money for a restaurant to invite the guests. Since inviting needs invitation cards and some money involving for the book of place. And these are expensive nowadays.

Therefore, if you consider these reasons, you prefer have a chocolate to sell of holding a dinner party and raise money in this way.

Thank you for giving me the chance to describe my own idea about the project, and I will always support the workplace when needed.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

From my point of view, after considering both options carefully, I would like to help plan and host a dinner party rather than selling chocolate bars. Although selling chocolate seems convenient, I believe holding a dinner party with the charge of 30 $ per guest is more beneficial for the fundraising process due to some reasons.

Firstly, the occasion of party hosting allows for a more social and engaging experience. It provides an opportunity for colleagues, and family to come together and have fun in the company. Unlike selling bars, which is more of an individual task, a dinner party encourages interaction and fosters a sense of community. Moreover, it allows us to showcase our culinary and create a memorable event for all participants as well as a target to raise the budget. On the other hand, it has more potential to raise the amount needed in a shorter period of time. We are naturally able to approach the aim more efficiently by this project. It additionally helps us tap into a larger network of donors. Furthermore, as you all believe, this party organisation can easily support local businesses. By hosting the ceremony at a local restaurant, we will contribute to the community by boosting their revenue and promoting their services as well.

Considering these mentioned reasons, I am entirely confident that this action brings the benefit within the deadline for our workplace fundraising project. This is my personal opinion, and I will support whatever final decision is made.