Revised Celpip 4-5 response

Dear James,

How are you? At first, I am very excited about you last semester grades. Actually, you done perfect and I will not expect such a performance from you. About your decision to find a job, I believe that continuing your education is better than starting a business right now after high school. You know entering to university can helps you to improve and it is good for your future work. Even, more work idea come to your mind about business After that, if you don’t go to university, I am sure you can’t earn enough money yet because it needs high knowledge that can earn only at university. So, going to work now after end the school period is not well and unwise and can reduce your energy and motivation. After all, I am very happy and I would like you go to university instead of working.

Your science teacher,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Hello Jack Robertson,

I am writing this email to show my happiness and excitement about your excellent grades this semester. But, I would like to tell to you some facts about working or going to university.

As you know, education is really important for students as smart as you. They should have at least a Bachelor’s degree to be able to start a successful job in the future. Without that, you cannot easily get a good job and you may fail quickly.

Secondly, I believe that if you go to work after high school, you won’t stay there longer than two or three years, because you don’t have enough knowledge to expand the business well. And when you finally want to return to education, it might be too late.

That’s all I wanted to say. I am sure you will think carefully before deciding. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your science teacher,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Dear Robert,

I am your English tutor, and I am writing to congratulate you on achieving the best marks that our school has ever seen. However, when I heard you wanted to start a business so soon, I felt concerned, considering a few important reasons. I would certainly recommend entering the career world if you were someone else,but in your case, I believe it’s better to continue your education as far as possible. Since you’re young and free from major responsibilities, it’s the perfect time to focus on your future.

Nevertheless, thinking about a career from now could be very stressful, especially without a strong academic foundation or knowledge about the field. So you may fail and face serious challenges. Anyway, I hope you’re not tempted by short-term earnings and instead choose the best path for your future.

I look forward to hearing great news from you.

Kind regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

I would like to have a vegetable and fruit market in the park every Saturday because it has more benefit for the people in area. First of all, the neighbours don’t have any fruit shop around the centre and we have to travel much distance to arrive at the nearest store. But, recently, a new mall is open, where its second story is all about appliance items for kitchen, bathrooms and bedrooms. I think it is not a good idea to forget about a big vegetable and fruit market at the moment.

Secondly, nowadays, I think buying vegetables and fruits is more important and common especially because most people in the area are old and adults. And as you know, adults like to always buy vegetables and eat fruits. For instance, I buy vegetables for my grandparents every week but they seldom buy home items like electrical devices and kitchen appliances.Although there are some families want to always buy second-hand things .

In general, I think the community should start an organic fruit and vegetable shop because it is more necessary for us than other things.

Thanks a lot for giving chance to me to talk about my preference.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Vegetables and fruit are some of the most important things for a family and I believe they are better for the neighbourhood than an appliance market or a second-hand furniture shop according to several clear reasons.

For example, I am sure that a house needs food and ingredients every day, so parents ought to think about buying them very often. However, when it comes to home appliance and second-hand furniture, they are not in the first priority for a house and it is better to hold a vegetable and fruit market in the park.

On the other hand, there are two new markets which sell and repair furniture, so relatively, holding a furniture market is very useless and will certainly have less visitors and buyers, if a market doesn’t have a great way to progress, it will fail as soon as possible.

Therefore, in my opinion, having a weekly fruit and vegetable shop can help people more and by this way we can even prevent illnesses in fact.

Anyway, I am really happy to take part to this survey about my area and I hope the best decision will be made for us.

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Personally, I think holding a second-hand furniture market with appliances is more advantageous than spending time considering fruit and vegetable markets. In other words, they will bring about a lot more benefits for the region and the residents living there, I guess!

One of the most evident positive points regarding the mentioned market is the given potential to the youth to be familiar with the available things and their usage, so as to feel eager to start a repairing service market for themselves or at least getting some information about how electrical items work, probably from the experts.

Furthermore, as the community knows, the area surrounding the park is not spacious enough to wash and clean fruits and vegetables easily. Imagine how difficult it is to use a lot of water just for cleaning fruits. However, in a furniture and appliance market, we do not need to use water and the park itself seems adequate.

Considering these reasons, I assume having a furniture markets is more suitable and necessary. Again, this is my personal idea and I will back whatever decision is finally made.

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

Dear James,

How are you? At first, I am very excited about you last semester grades. Actually, you done perfect and I will not expect such a performance from you. About your decision to find a job, I believe that continuing your education is better than starting a business right now after high school. You know entering to university can helps you to improve and it is good for your future work. Even, more work idea come to your mind about business After that, if you don’t go to university, I am sure you can’t earn enough money yet because it needs high knowledge that can earn only at university. So, going to work now after end the school period is not well and unwise and can reduce your energy and motivation. After all, I am very happy and I would like you go to university instead of working.

Your science teacher,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Hello Jack Robertson,

I am writing this email to show my happiness and excitement about your excellent grades this semester. But, I would like to tell to you some facts about working or going to university.

As you know, education is really important for students as smart as you. They should have at least a Bachelor’s degree to be able to start a successful job in the future. Without that, you cannot easily get a good job and you may fail quickly.

Secondly, I believe that if you go to work after high school, you won’t stay there longer than two or three years, because you don’t have enough knowledge to expand the business well. And when you finally want to return to education, it might be too late.

That’s all I wanted to say. I am sure you will think carefully before deciding. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your science teacher,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Dear Robert,

I am your English tutor, and I am writing to congratulate you on achieving the best marks that our school has ever seen. However, when I heard you wanted to start a business so soon, I felt concerned, considering a few important reasons. I would certainly recommend entering the career world if you were someone else,but in your case, I believe it’s better to continue your education as far as possible. Since you’re young and free from major responsibilities, it’s the perfect time to focus on your future.

Nevertheless, thinking about a career from now could be very stressful, especially without a strong academic foundation or knowledge about the field. So you may fail and face serious challenges. Anyway, I hope you’re not tempted by short-term earnings and instead choose the best path for your future.

I look forward to hearing great news from you.

Kind regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

I would like to have a vegetable and fruit market in the park every Saturday because it has more benefit for the people in area. First of all, the neighbours don’t have any fruit shop around the centre and we have to travel much distance to arrive at the nearest store. But, recently, a new mall is open, where its second story is all about appliance items for kitchen, bathrooms and bedrooms. I think it is not a good idea to forget about a big vegetable and fruit market at the moment.

Secondly, nowadays, I think buying vegetables and fruits is more important and common especially because most people in the area are old and adults. And as you know, adults like to always buy vegetables and eat fruits. For instance, I buy vegetables for my grandparents every week but they seldom buy home items like electrical devices and kitchen appliances.Although there are some families want to always buy second-hand things .

In general, I think the community should start an organic fruit and vegetable shop because it is more necessary for us than other things.

Thanks a lot for giving chance to me to talk about my preference.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Vegetables and fruit are some of the most important things for a family and I believe they are better for the neighbourhood than an appliance market or a second-hand furniture shop according to several clear reasons.

For example, I am sure that a house needs food and ingredients every day, so parents ought to think about buying them very often. However, when it comes to home appliance and second-hand furniture, they are not in the first priority for a house and it is better to hold a vegetable and fruit market in the park.

On the other hand, there are two new markets which sell and repair furniture, so relatively, holding a furniture market is very useless and will certainly have less visitors and buyers, if a market doesn’t have a great way to progress, it will fail as soon as possible.

Therefore, in my opinion, having a weekly fruit and vegetable shop can help people more and by this way we can even prevent illnesses in fact.

Anyway, I am really happy to take part to this survey about my area and I hope the best decision will be made for us.

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Personally, I think holding a second-hand furniture market with appliances is more advantageous than spending time considering fruit and vegetable markets. In other words, they will bring about a lot more benefits for the region and the residents living there, I guess!

One of the most evident positive points regarding the mentioned market is the given potential to the youth to be familiar with the available things and their usage, so as to feel eager to start a repairing service market for themselves or at least getting some information about how electrical items work, probably from the experts.

Furthermore, as the community knows, the area surrounding the park is not spacious enough to wash and clean fruits and vegetables easily. Imagine how difficult it is to use a lot of water just for cleaning fruits. However, in a furniture and appliance market, we do not need to use water and the park itself seems adequate.

Considering these reasons, I assume having a furniture markets is more suitable and necessary. Again, this is my personal idea and I will back whatever decision is finally made.