Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

To, local newspaper

Subject, attention needed to the park

I’m extremely unhappy because of the bad condition in the nearby park after the birds coming. Actually, this park has excellent view and is very important for me and my co-worker. It always makes us feel good and energetic after we are busy in the work. So, you see that it is the symbol of comfort and relaxation for everybody.

Nowadays, a large number of noisy birds are flying over the park in the sky and it is bad for the air and nature. Besides, they steal our food, and sometimes we can’t stop them. For instance, last monday, they attacked us dangerously and we ran away to the office. So they are bringing problems to the workers, especially me and my best friend.

If you don’t hurry, they are destroying it very fast. So,as a resident, I deeply recommend to the officials and managers and the local newspaper to build safe places for the visitors to enjoy. And you can build some deterrents to keep them away.

I hope they help fix the problem and i am looking forward to see the park again in the best way.

Thanks for you attention.

Sincerely,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Dear the Local newspaper,

I am an assistant in the Tomo Company, and I always spend my lunch break with my colleague James in the nearby park in a disgraceful condition. As all of the residents know, this green area is very important part of our daily routine because it helps us to feel better and more energetic during our office work, and its lovely nature is refreshing for us.

However, since summer began two months ago, we haven’t had comfortable day in the park. According to the park rules, there should be many staff members cleaning the food waste and bird droppings, but the birds mostly destroy our relaxation by their noise and the clean nature has changed to a messy area. For example, yesterday we couldn’t enjoy our lunch break because of the birds.

At the end, I would suggested the newspaper’s readers as well as the city officials to build pleasant shelters for the visitor, so people can relax again. Also, why don’t you hire more workers for the park to protect it?

I look forward to seeing improvements soon.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Dear Local Newspaper,

I am writing to bring your attention to a serious issue that has greatly affected my colleague and me during our lunchtime in the nearby park. Honestly, this area appears to be important as it always assists us and others to recharge effectively after a busy morning at the office.

However, our comfort has been completely disrupted by the growing number of birds, especially pigeons, nowadays. They often stay in the area unless they steal parts of our lunch. This is not only unpleasant, but it also harms the park environment due to their dirty droppings.

Due to this matter, I urge the newspaper’s readers, city officials, and park managers to take practical action immediately. I suggest they hire more maintenance workers to regularly clean the park, removing the food waste to discourage the birds from flying over there. Or installing bird deterrents would also help. By these, we can restore the tranquillity of our park.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

I think that having cameras in the building is far better than changing the locks.Because doors are not the only way for theft to happen. Also, some people lost their keys and patterns that make situation worse than ever. On the other hand, watching eyes build security and increase the tracking of the rooms from both inside and outside.

As all we heard in news, robbers steal everything everyday from the houses consequently if we will place a camera, we are able to find the thief easily. For example, last year one of the bank could catch the robber just by the camera security.

On the other hand, it will improve the safety at our side. For example, imagine a theif has entered the apartment and by it we can have record the best for the police to help him to find the robber easily.

In conclusion, I think if we improve and install many cameras security around the building and inside the apartments, it is working as a lock to make the society safer and where nothing bad happen. So , I am here to offer any help you need.

Thank you for give me this chance to share my personal opinion about the point.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

In fact, I would prefer to express my preference to install locks for the door instead of applying some security cameras for the apartment. Because I believe it will offer more reliable safety and control to the apartments.So, let me provide the reasons for my choice.

First of all, if the management tries to install locks with biological feature, we can provide a difficult way of entry. For example, whenever the owner wants to go inside, they are able to use their fingerprints or digital eye-check to allow them to walk in. However, cameras never have such an ability although they can even assist the police to find the thief simply, but new and technological lockers are more useful nowadays.

On the other hand, I guess if the management can install the lockers, the real owners of the houses in the building can have the access privately in the lock but I don’t think the camera is under the control of the people themselves, so the manager will take care of them and have a monthly check.

In general, I believe the installation of new locks for the doors are more suitable than the cameras which are only good for detecting the thief, not to avoid them enter the rooms.

Thank you for considering my input over this matter.

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

I assume implementing more modern locks on the entrance doors is far better than improving the number of cameras around. For sure, this new plan will bring more benefits for the whole apartment regarding the security matter, considering the following reasons!

First, as the relevant technology is noticed, nowadays, due to the progress in the biological characteristics of the digital lockers,including features most annoying to robbers, the best locks can strongly assure residents that the rate of crime will plummet to a large extent, butI have not found any strong surveillance in cameras compared to locks.

Additionally, the apartment is already equipped with camera security and we have experienced incidents even after they were installed, however, giving this opportunity to the modern locks is practical to see how they will protect the houses in the future! In general, considering the mentioned reasons, I reckon the management should implement new locks over the doors.

Again, this is my personal opinion, but I will back whatever decision is made.

Thank you for giving me the chance to share my opinions!

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

To, local newspaper

Subject, attention needed to the park

I’m extremely unhappy because of the bad condition in the nearby park after the birds coming. Actually, this park has excellent view and is very important for me and my co-worker. It always makes us feel good and energetic after we are busy in the work. So, you see that it is the symbol of comfort and relaxation for everybody.

Nowadays, a large number of noisy birds are flying over the park in the sky and it is bad for the air and nature. Besides, they steal our food, and sometimes we can’t stop them. For instance, last monday, they attacked us dangerously and we ran away to the office. So they are bringing problems to the workers, especially me and my best friend.

If you don’t hurry, they are destroying it very fast. So,as a resident, I deeply recommend to the officials and managers and the local newspaper to build safe places for the visitors to enjoy. And you can build some deterrents to keep them away.

I hope they help fix the problem and i am looking forward to see the park again in the best way.

Thanks for you attention.

Sincerely,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Dear the Local newspaper,

I am an assistant in the Tomo Company, and I always spend my lunch break with my colleague James in the nearby park in a disgraceful condition. As all of the residents know, this green area is very important part of our daily routine because it helps us to feel better and more energetic during our office work, and its lovely nature is refreshing for us.

However, since summer began two months ago, we haven’t had comfortable day in the park. According to the park rules, there should be many staff members cleaning the food waste and bird droppings, but the birds mostly destroy our relaxation by their noise and the clean nature has changed to a messy area. For example, yesterday we couldn’t enjoy our lunch break because of the birds.

At the end, I would suggested the newspaper’s readers as well as the city officials to build pleasant shelters for the visitor, so people can relax again. Also, why don’t you hire more workers for the park to protect it?

I look forward to seeing improvements soon.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

Dear Local Newspaper,

I am writing to bring your attention to a serious issue that has greatly affected my colleague and me during our lunchtime in the nearby park. Honestly, this area appears to be important as it always assists us and others to recharge effectively after a busy morning at the office.

However, our comfort has been completely disrupted by the growing number of birds, especially pigeons, nowadays. They often stay in the area unless they steal parts of our lunch. This is not only unpleasant, but it also harms the park environment due to their dirty droppings.

Due to this matter, I urge the newspaper’s readers, city officials, and park managers to take practical action immediately. I suggest they hire more maintenance workers to regularly clean the park, removing the food waste to discourage the birds from flying over there. Or installing bird deterrents would also help. By these, we can restore the tranquillity of our park.

Thank you for your consideration.

Sincerely yours,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

I think that having cameras in the building is far better than changing the locks.Because doors are not the only way for theft to happen. Also, some people lost their keys and patterns that make situation worse than ever. On the other hand, watching eyes build security and increase the tracking of the rooms from both inside and outside.

As all we heard in news, robbers steal everything everyday from the houses consequently if we will place a camera, we are able to find the thief easily. For example, last year one of the bank could catch the robber just by the camera security.

On the other hand, it will improve the safety at our side. For example, imagine a theif has entered the apartment and by it we can have record the best for the police to help him to find the robber easily.

In conclusion, I think if we improve and install many cameras security around the building and inside the apartments, it is working as a lock to make the society safer and where nothing bad happen. So , I am here to offer any help you need.

Thank you for give me this chance to share my personal opinion about the point.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

In fact, I would prefer to express my preference to install locks for the door instead of applying some security cameras for the apartment. Because I believe it will offer more reliable safety and control to the apartments.So, let me provide the reasons for my choice.

First of all, if the management tries to install locks with biological feature, we can provide a difficult way of entry. For example, whenever the owner wants to go inside, they are able to use their fingerprints or digital eye-check to allow them to walk in. However, cameras never have such an ability although they can even assist the police to find the thief simply, but new and technological lockers are more useful nowadays.

On the other hand, I guess if the management can install the lockers, the real owners of the houses in the building can have the access privately in the lock but I don’t think the camera is under the control of the people themselves, so the manager will take care of them and have a monthly check.

In general, I believe the installation of new locks for the doors are more suitable than the cameras which are only good for detecting the thief, not to avoid them enter the rooms.

Thank you for considering my input over this matter.

Revised Celpip 10-12 response

I assume implementing more modern locks on the entrance doors is far better than improving the number of cameras around. For sure, this new plan will bring more benefits for the whole apartment regarding the security matter, considering the following reasons!

First, as the relevant technology is noticed, nowadays, due to the progress in the biological characteristics of the digital lockers,including features most annoying to robbers, the best locks can strongly assure residents that the rate of crime will plummet to a large extent, butI have not found any strong surveillance in cameras compared to locks.

Additionally, the apartment is already equipped with camera security and we have experienced incidents even after they were installed, however, giving this opportunity to the modern locks is practical to see how they will protect the houses in the future! In general, considering the mentioned reasons, I reckon the management should implement new locks over the doors.

Again, this is my personal opinion, but I will back whatever decision is made.

Thank you for giving me the chance to share my opinions!