Revised Celpip 4-5 response

Dear coffee shop manager,

I am Soheil and I want to tell you that the café is very dirty and in a bad way. I can’t find good place for sit when I came with my family to eat dinner. Actually I think it is very important to have something for customers and we like the atmosphere. Also it was great place to meet friends and relax a book reading.

For example, yesterday my family and I cannot eat lunch because we didn’t sit and we left the place where the smell was terrible for us tp eat food. But the biggest problem is we found the table not clean. And even, there were no napkin on the table.

So I like to offer excellent thing to help you solve the problem. You should have more staff work inside and outside. They should clean the extra foods after customers. Or you can prepare some garbage bin near the tables for puting the remain food.

Thank you for your consideration.

Best wishes,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Dear manager,

I am writing an email to let you know that I’m really concerned and upset about the poor condition in the cafe especially the unclean tables and seats these days. I am sure you know how much is the cafe important for the people and for my family because we didn’t study, work calmly or see our friends unless we found this new place. It was very warm and comfortable.

Actually, nowadays, when I visit the cafe to work, relax or talk with my friends, it is difficult to find clean seat and table. Sometime, the indoor area smells bad, maybe because of the garbage bins. I want to suggest an excellent sollution for this problem. For example, why don’t you add more staff to your cleaning service to work full-time? So they can make the atmosphere nice and pleasant.

I hope you consider my point.

Thank you very much.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

To whom it may concern,

I am writing this email to express my concern regarding the disappointing daily condition of the seats and tables. Clearly, this local café is considered special by many people in the neighborhood, like me, who loves the fresh outdoor ambiance and the nostalgic interior that always catch my attention. Indeed, this cozy place has always been welcoming for working, studying, and spending time with friends.

However, recently, the café is not as clean as before, which has discouraged regular visitors, including me and my wife, from returning to this café. For instance, last weekend, we had to initially clean our own seats as they had small leftover food and dirty dishes. We did not even notice any napkins around!

To address these problems, I would like to suggest a few solutions. Firstly, increasing the frequency of cleaning routines certainly ensures a consistently comfortable space for customers. Next, you should better train the staff to act more attentively to increase the expected hygiene standards. I hope you find these effective as I believe we will return to the enjoyable moments in a clean coffee shop.

Kind regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

I think it is not good building a new library to put the little stores out of business. Actually I am sure the stores should stays in the city because they are our history and important for city and people So move them to a bookstore new one can has many problems in the city I am going to talking.

At first when we want change to happen in a city we should thinking that a hard process is it and we may lose some books in it so the history of the city will damage and people are hard to relieve due to this task. For example authority is destroying three old bookstore should think to move the books to new bookstore but the valuable books can lose in process or they misplace which isn’t great for the country honour and history.

Also, one disadvantage is that we should keep the old library because of some reasons. First they are the history and it was building in the 19 century by our former king is important for us and authorities. If you destroy the old playing with the culture city is negative for the future generation.

In conclusion I agree to not constructing a large bookstore in city is better than breaking and ruin the historical place now.

Thank you very much for give me the chance to sharing my idea. I hope you choose the better thing for the town.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

I personally believe that the old 3 bookstores should stay in the city because they are related to the city’s history and also it might misplaced. Even new building will save time of people but we cannot destroy our rich heritage due to wish everything on one floor.

Certainly, these three bookstores was made by the British when our town was part of the empire. Additionally, most of the carvings and shelling belong to the 19th century. And most of the people have memories of the wall painting and surroundings of the buildings. So I think it is not a good idea to remove the three old bookstores only to construct a huge and new one.

Furthermore, it will be a common thing to misplace the important items while move the books and related things to the other bookstores. For instance, about three years ago, Noble bookstore did the same things and unfortunately lose many valuable books and articles.Therefore, the mayor had better to not jeopardise the bunch of book when they are about to put them to the other new libraries. In conclusion, constructing new library is not a great idea in my opinion. Although, we can spend some money on our old ones and renovate them.

Again this is my personal idea and I will support what decision the authority make.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Personally, I believe thinking about constructing one contemporary library and destroying the three historical bookstores would not be a logical opinion. Although this project will definitely expand the current capacity, the probable negative consequences might outweigh the advantages. To begin with, the city’s old bookstore was built by our president, which appears to be evidently the symbol of peace, courage and huge enthusiasm, as the authorities and local people attempted to preserve it along with the desperate war in 1948. Thus, the building not only has the meaning of ambition, but it also conveys history!

Furthermore, we cannot ignore the long complicated process of collecting the numerous papers and books from three libraries, finishing the task without misplacing. For instance, the Noble library in London had done such a similar project with their bookstores, losing and damaging some of the books inadvertently.

Considering these reasons, I assume renovating the old bookstores is more suitable than constructing a new one at the moment.

Again, this is my personal opinion, and naturally I will support whatever decision is made.

I appreciate the authority for giving me the chance to attend the destiny of my city’s libraries.

Revised Celpip 4-5 response

Dear coffee shop manager,

I am Soheil and I want to tell you that the café is very dirty and in a bad way. I can’t find good place for sit when I came with my family to eat dinner. Actually I think it is very important to have something for customers and we like the atmosphere. Also it was great place to meet friends and relax a book reading.

For example, yesterday my family and I cannot eat lunch because we didn’t sit and we left the place where the smell was terrible for us tp eat food. But the biggest problem is we found the table not clean. And even, there were no napkin on the table.

So I like to offer excellent thing to help you solve the problem. You should have more staff work inside and outside. They should clean the extra foods after customers. Or you can prepare some garbage bin near the tables for puting the remain food.

Thank you for your consideration.

Best wishes,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

Dear manager,

I am writing an email to let you know that I’m really concerned and upset about the poor condition in the cafe especially the unclean tables and seats these days. I am sure you know how much is the cafe important for the people and for my family because we didn’t study, work calmly or see our friends unless we found this new place. It was very warm and comfortable.

Actually, nowadays, when I visit the cafe to work, relax or talk with my friends, it is difficult to find clean seat and table. Sometime, the indoor area smells bad, maybe because of the garbage bins. I want to suggest an excellent sollution for this problem. For example, why don’t you add more staff to your cleaning service to work full-time? So they can make the atmosphere nice and pleasant.

I hope you consider my point.

Thank you very much.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

To whom it may concern,

I am writing this email to express my concern regarding the disappointing daily condition of the seats and tables. Clearly, this local café is considered special by many people in the neighborhood, like me, who loves the fresh outdoor ambiance and the nostalgic interior that always catch my attention. Indeed, this cozy place has always been welcoming for working, studying, and spending time with friends.

However, recently, the café is not as clean as before, which has discouraged regular visitors, including me and my wife, from returning to this café. For instance, last weekend, we had to initially clean our own seats as they had small leftover food and dirty dishes. We did not even notice any napkins around!

To address these problems, I would like to suggest a few solutions. Firstly, increasing the frequency of cleaning routines certainly ensures a consistently comfortable space for customers. Next, you should better train the staff to act more attentively to increase the expected hygiene standards. I hope you find these effective as I believe we will return to the enjoyable moments in a clean coffee shop.

Kind regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 - 5 response

I think it is not good building a new library to put the little stores out of business. Actually I am sure the stores should stays in the city because they are our history and important for city and people So move them to a bookstore new one can has many problems in the city I am going to talking.

At first when we want change to happen in a city we should thinking that a hard process is it and we may lose some books in it so the history of the city will damage and people are hard to relieve due to this task. For example authority is destroying three old bookstore should think to move the books to new bookstore but the valuable books can lose in process or they misplace which isn’t great for the country honour and history.

Also, one disadvantage is that we should keep the old library because of some reasons. First they are the history and it was building in the 19 century by our former king is important for us and authorities. If you destroy the old playing with the culture city is negative for the future generation.

In conclusion I agree to not constructing a large bookstore in city is better than breaking and ruin the historical place now.

Thank you very much for give me the chance to sharing my idea. I hope you choose the better thing for the town.

Revised Celpip 7-8 response

I personally believe that the old 3 bookstores should stay in the city because they are related to the city’s history and also it might misplaced. Even new building will save time of people but we cannot destroy our rich heritage due to wish everything on one floor.

Certainly, these three bookstores was made by the British when our town was part of the empire. Additionally, most of the carvings and shelling belong to the 19th century. And most of the people have memories of the wall painting and surroundings of the buildings. So I think it is not a good idea to remove the three old bookstores only to construct a huge and new one.

Furthermore, it will be a common thing to misplace the important items while move the books and related things to the other bookstores. For instance, about three years ago, Noble bookstore did the same things and unfortunately lose many valuable books and articles.Therefore, the mayor had better to not jeopardise the bunch of book when they are about to put them to the other new libraries. In conclusion, constructing new library is not a great idea in my opinion. Although, we can spend some money on our old ones and renovate them.

Again this is my personal idea and I will support what decision the authority make.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Personally, I believe thinking about constructing one contemporary library and destroying the three historical bookstores would not be a logical opinion. Although this project will definitely expand the current capacity, the probable negative consequences might outweigh the advantages. To begin with, the city’s old bookstore was built by our president, which appears to be evidently the symbol of peace, courage and huge enthusiasm, as the authorities and local people attempted to preserve it along with the desperate war in 1948. Thus, the building not only has the meaning of ambition, but it also conveys history!

Furthermore, we cannot ignore the long complicated process of collecting the numerous papers and books from three libraries, finishing the task without misplacing. For instance, the Noble library in London had done such a similar project with their bookstores, losing and damaging some of the books inadvertently.

Considering these reasons, I assume renovating the old bookstores is more suitable than constructing a new one at the moment.

Again, this is my personal opinion, and naturally I will support whatever decision is made.

I appreciate the authority for giving me the chance to attend the destiny of my city’s libraries.