CELPIP 4-5 Response Dear Sir, As i was browsing on internet, in a search for a used car in Edmonton city area location i came to know about Honda city in Black, Picture that i have came across as seen on internet, on www.downtown car.com. well i found out, that you have posted a Advertisement about your car, which looks similar like Honda city Black, but there was no information given about your car and contact details, as i cannot contact you for further details or any query about the car. which are as follow: car price, car mileage, year, car record and maintenance report and ownership. I am really interested in car and curious to know about car details and price that you will be asking for,well while looking at your car it looks in pretty good condition, but i would like to know much about car details before paying any price for it.Can you please let me know about your time, place, date and your contact details, i really appreciate for your precious time. Below is my contact details, i will be waiting for your reply. Sincerely, John Doe 123-456-7890 [email protected]

CELPIP 7-8 Response Dear Seller, I am looking for a new car right now and I found your post about your car on Kijijji. Best regardsI would like to know some things about the car, because I am thinking of buying it from you. When was the last oil change? How old is the car? Was it driven a lot? How is the timing belt? Are the wheel bearings still good? Was the car in an accident before? If so, was the damage repaired correctly? Also, I could live with a little bit of rust on the body. It would be very good if we could meet up so that I can have a look at the car and test drive it. We could discuss everything else than. Sincerely

CELPIP 10-12 Response Good morning I saw your car for sale on the internet and I am interested in purchasing it. I see that you have included a photo of the car and I would like more information about it. Could you please tell me more about the car? What is the model and year? What is the mileage? Are there any extras included such as winter tires? Is the car still under the manufacturer’s warrantee? If it is indeed the car that I am looking for, I would be willing to pay a market related price in cash. Currently that make is selling for about $15000. This clearly depends on the condition of the car. If you are interested, I would like to test drive it. Please let me know when and where I can meet you. I am generally free in the afternoons. My contact details are listed below. Thank you Rowan 789-123-2222 [email protected]

CELPIP 4-5 Response In my opinion builder should be allowed to purchase the park land to be replaced with building firstly the park is property of local government and builder must be getting it with very low rate then the market ,it will be great help for the senior citizen to obtain the apartment in a lower cost secondly they are old and most of them are already retied and may be not having enough savings to pay and and Finally it will make them happy and bring them close to the society because normally houses for senior citizen are far and in lonely places. and addition to this they will also have facility to easy excess to hospitals in an any emergencies ,and even day to day activities in the malls since this area is in the center of the city. Other then that what community should recommend to the builder some area to be designate for the children to play and also sit and walk ,since it going to be a home for retired people they also will get interacted with children and can meet and walk which certainly help them to improve their health and solve both purposes.

CELPIP 7-8 Response To The City of Calgary The park should be left for the following reasons- These park have served as a place that promotes social networking between families- Families within the community have benefited from the park as I am one of the candidates who met my life partner in this park and currently enjoyed companies and love of other families members in this community Secondly the park also has been used for picnics and hosting community events like soccer, basketball, volley ball and other sport events in the summer. The park has served as an excellent place of community event that promotes peace and healthy living amongst members of the community. Lastly, our community park has a very good aesthetic nature and serves as an excellent place for inspiration. While the park provides a good place for sight seeing, I have seen other teens use the park to rehearse for their club events like dancing and singing. I strongly believe the park should be left as in as its serves a better purpose that having a building erected on it.

CELPIP 10-12 Response I would like to place on record that I am strongly in favour of keeping the park as it is. The park is one of the few free recreational spaces available for children in our city as so many other areas of open land have had apartments built on them. We complain that our children spend too much time indoors playing on computers whilst we destroy the few places that remain for them to play outdoors and engage in physical activities and sport. The park has a playground and basketball court where children can exercise and socialise safely and close to their home, without having to travel further and cross increasingly busy streets. I prefer to retain open spaces for recreation to encourage health lifestyles in our children. If the land is developed for apartments for seniors, the pressure on the infrastructure will increase as these people, understandably, are reliant on cars for getting around. The traffic is already busy and has become problematic throughout the day, which is when seniors will increase traffic, as well as in the rush hour periods. There have also been a number of accidents due to the high volume of traffic.

CELPIP 4-5 Response Dear Sir, As i was browsing on internet, in a search for a used car in Edmonton city area location i came to know about Honda city in Black, Picture that i have came across as seen on internet, on www.downtown car.com. well i found out, that you have posted a Advertisement about your car, which looks similar like Honda city Black, but there was no information given about your car and contact details, as i cannot contact you for further details or any query about the car. which are as follow: car price, car mileage, year, car record and maintenance report and ownership. I am really interested in car and curious to know about car details and price that you will be asking for,well while looking at your car it looks in pretty good condition, but i would like to know much about car details before paying any price for it.Can you please let me know about your time, place, date and your contact details, i really appreciate for your precious time. Below is my contact details, i will be waiting for your reply. Sincerely, John Doe 123-456-7890 [email protected]

CELPIP 7-8 Response Dear Seller, I am looking for a new car right now and I found your post about your car on Kijijji. Best regardsI would like to know some things about the car, because I am thinking of buying it from you. When was the last oil change? How old is the car? Was it driven a lot? How is the timing belt? Are the wheel bearings still good? Was the car in an accident before? If so, was the damage repaired correctly? Also, I could live with a little bit of rust on the body. It would be very good if we could meet up so that I can have a look at the car and test drive it. We could discuss everything else than. Sincerely

CELPIP 10-12 Response Good morning I saw your car for sale on the internet and I am interested in purchasing it. I see that you have included a photo of the car and I would like more information about it. Could you please tell me more about the car? What is the model and year? What is the mileage? Are there any extras included such as winter tires? Is the car still under the manufacturer’s warrantee? If it is indeed the car that I am looking for, I would be willing to pay a market related price in cash. Currently that make is selling for about $15000. This clearly depends on the condition of the car. If you are interested, I would like to test drive it. Please let me know when and where I can meet you. I am generally free in the afternoons. My contact details are listed below. Thank you Rowan 789-123-2222 [email protected]

CELPIP 4-5 Response In my opinion builder should be allowed to purchase the park land to be replaced with building firstly the park is property of local government and builder must be getting it with very low rate then the market ,it will be great help for the senior citizen to obtain the apartment in a lower cost secondly they are old and most of them are already retied and may be not having enough savings to pay and and Finally it will make them happy and bring them close to the society because normally houses for senior citizen are far and in lonely places. and addition to this they will also have facility to easy excess to hospitals in an any emergencies ,and even day to day activities in the malls since this area is in the center of the city. Other then that what community should recommend to the builder some area to be designate for the children to play and also sit and walk ,since it going to be a home for retired people they also will get interacted with children and can meet and walk which certainly help them to improve their health and solve both purposes.

CELPIP 7-8 Response To The City of Calgary The park should be left for the following reasons- These park have served as a place that promotes social networking between families- Families within the community have benefited from the park as I am one of the candidates who met my life partner in this park and currently enjoyed companies and love of other families members in this community Secondly the park also has been used for picnics and hosting community events like soccer, basketball, volley ball and other sport events in the summer. The park has served as an excellent place of community event that promotes peace and healthy living amongst members of the community. Lastly, our community park has a very good aesthetic nature and serves as an excellent place for inspiration. While the park provides a good place for sight seeing, I have seen other teens use the park to rehearse for their club events like dancing and singing. I strongly believe the park should be left as in as its serves a better purpose that having a building erected on it.

CELPIP 10-12 Response I would like to place on record that I am strongly in favour of keeping the park as it is. The park is one of the few free recreational spaces available for children in our city as so many other areas of open land have had apartments built on them. We complain that our children spend too much time indoors playing on computers whilst we destroy the few places that remain for them to play outdoors and engage in physical activities and sport. The park has a playground and basketball court where children can exercise and socialise safely and close to their home, without having to travel further and cross increasingly busy streets. I prefer to retain open spaces for recreation to encourage health lifestyles in our children. If the land is developed for apartments for seniors, the pressure on the infrastructure will increase as these people, understandably, are reliant on cars for getting around. The traffic is already busy and has become problematic throughout the day, which is when seniors will increase traffic, as well as in the rush hour periods. There have also been a number of accidents due to the high volume of traffic.