Revised Celpip 4 -5 response

Dear the manager,

I am Soheil and i contacted you regarding book appointment for Saturday with a half deposit. I came to the service location to get new internet connection for my apartment. The appointment scheduled but I waitd and nobody came and I don’t get any updates or calls about the next appointment. I need internet connection as soon as possible because of some reasons. First I moved to the Chicago last weekend and my owner does not provide any Internets for me. Next my job needs internet and I have to work from home so I can’t work now. Besides, I go to a nearby cafe to use the wifi but the speed is slow.

However, my job is going to start in Monday and is there any chance you can set the wifi before that? I need Sunday to set up all my systems and log in. Or if you can’t, please give me a refund so I can call another internet service company.

Thank you very much. I am eagerly waiting for your answer.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7- 8 response

Dear manager,

I am writing this email to let you know how disappointed I am because you did not consider my emergency about internet last monday. Actually, I waited for more than two hours, but nobody appeared at the location. So I left the appointment without any result.

To be honest I need internet as soon as possible for several reason. First, I need a stable connection because I regularly communicate with my friends and family. Also my job is remote, and I need a fast internet connection to work on time.

So, I would like to suggest a few solutions to fix this problem. First, if you can, please schedule another appointment for me but with a guarantee that someone will come on time. Next, you can even give me a refund so I can call another internet provider.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Subject, Delayed Internet Service Appointment

To, Sefro Yek Company

Dear manager,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my frustration and concern regarding the recent internet service appointment I scheduled with your company. However, nobody arrived at the designated time, causing inconvenience and unhappiness.

As a recent resident of Chicago, I urgently require internet service for several reasons. Firstly, I will be working remotely and need a reliable and stable internet connection to fulfill my professional duties. Furthermore, as a newcomer, I strongly rely on the internet for essential tasks such as banking, finding local services, and keeping in touch with close friends and family.

Considering the significance of the connection for me, I kindly request that your company take immediate actions to solve this issue. I suggest rescheduling another appointment and ensuring that a technician arrives on time. Alternatively, you can issue a refund so I will be able to cantact another internet provider company.

Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 -5 response

Actually I think I can select project to do alone . i am sure I cannot focus great on it if members be many or because of other logical reasons I want working without people and alone.

At first when I am with friends and other people in group , I can’t do my work better. For example I am not very sociable so I am not able to handle in group and I will fail certainly. Since you know that a person needs sociable to act freely in a team and succeed in the group. So I wouldn’t finish it on time. Secondly when we want to work in a team we should set times to visit each other more so we can write the project and work on part lecture and online searching. However this isn’t suitable for me because I am living with grandmother and I am not able to have enough time to have appointment and visit other members. So my grade in project will not serve my needs and I am upset a lot.

So, I prefer working alone and turning it on time but not work with my classmate in it due to the reasons I mention.

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

I would like to say that personally I prefer to do my project in a group of three, as this simplifies the whole task more than ever. Although working alone is sometimes useful, in this kind, I mostly prefer doing it with others because of some reasons.

Firstly, as you know, when a person acts in groups, each one can focus on a particular issue and the whole project turns out to be better. For example, one of my friends completed his English project last month and he insisted that teamwork made him more comfortable and helped him finish earlier. On the other hand, when an individual works with other members, he not only finishes the duty but also learns something about cooperation. So, they aim to learn things for future in their lives. Besides, because our project has both a lecture and a presentation, we can handle it much easily.

In conclusion, according to these reasons, I am interested in working in a group of three to be successful and get the best mark for it.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Personally, I believe a work team in such vital projects is more fruitful for anyone instead of being individual. Although for some pupils it is far better to do it solitarily, I certainly prefer to get involved in a group of three with my classmates due to some reasons.

To begin, regardless of what the research field seems to be, working in groups fosters the spirit among participants, therefore, they are clearly saving more energy to create much enthusiasm to cope with the task efficiently, ensuring the team can cope with even the longest projects, including both the oral lecture and online research.

Moreover, as the project includes a 15-minute presentation, which I guess is the most complicated section, in a three - member group, we are able to easily divide the duties and concentrate on our own parts effectively, without being puzzled!

Considering these mentioned reasons, I can confess working in a group is much better, completing the project successfully.

Revised Celpip 4 -5 response

Dear the manager,

I am Soheil and i contacted you regarding book appointment for Saturday with a half deposit. I came to the service location to get new internet connection for my apartment. The appointment scheduled but I waitd and nobody came and I don’t get any updates or calls about the next appointment. I need internet connection as soon as possible because of some reasons. First I moved to the Chicago last weekend and my owner does not provide any Internets for me. Next my job needs internet and I have to work from home so I can’t work now. Besides, I go to a nearby cafe to use the wifi but the speed is slow.

However, my job is going to start in Monday and is there any chance you can set the wifi before that? I need Sunday to set up all my systems and log in. Or if you can’t, please give me a refund so I can call another internet service company.

Thank you very much. I am eagerly waiting for your answer.

Regards,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 7- 8 response

Dear manager,

I am writing this email to let you know how disappointed I am because you did not consider my emergency about internet last monday. Actually, I waited for more than two hours, but nobody appeared at the location. So I left the appointment without any result.

To be honest I need internet as soon as possible for several reason. First, I need a stable connection because I regularly communicate with my friends and family. Also my job is remote, and I need a fast internet connection to work on time.

So, I would like to suggest a few solutions to fix this problem. First, if you can, please schedule another appointment for me but with a guarantee that someone will come on time. Next, you can even give me a refund so I can call another internet provider.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Subject, Delayed Internet Service Appointment

To, Sefro Yek Company

Dear manager,

I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to express my frustration and concern regarding the recent internet service appointment I scheduled with your company. However, nobody arrived at the designated time, causing inconvenience and unhappiness.

As a recent resident of Chicago, I urgently require internet service for several reasons. Firstly, I will be working remotely and need a reliable and stable internet connection to fulfill my professional duties. Furthermore, as a newcomer, I strongly rely on the internet for essential tasks such as banking, finding local services, and keeping in touch with close friends and family.

Considering the significance of the connection for me, I kindly request that your company take immediate actions to solve this issue. I suggest rescheduling another appointment and ensuring that a technician arrives on time. Alternatively, you can issue a refund so I will be able to cantact another internet provider company.

Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

John Doe

Revised Celpip 4 -5 response

Actually I think I can select project to do alone . i am sure I cannot focus great on it if members be many or because of other logical reasons I want working without people and alone.

At first when I am with friends and other people in group , I can’t do my work better. For example I am not very sociable so I am not able to handle in group and I will fail certainly. Since you know that a person needs sociable to act freely in a team and succeed in the group. So I wouldn’t finish it on time. Secondly when we want to work in a team we should set times to visit each other more so we can write the project and work on part lecture and online searching. However this isn’t suitable for me because I am living with grandmother and I am not able to have enough time to have appointment and visit other members. So my grade in project will not serve my needs and I am upset a lot.

So, I prefer working alone and turning it on time but not work with my classmate in it due to the reasons I mention.

Revised Celpip 7 - 8 response

I would like to say that personally I prefer to do my project in a group of three, as this simplifies the whole task more than ever. Although working alone is sometimes useful, in this kind, I mostly prefer doing it with others because of some reasons.

Firstly, as you know, when a person acts in groups, each one can focus on a particular issue and the whole project turns out to be better. For example, one of my friends completed his English project last month and he insisted that teamwork made him more comfortable and helped him finish earlier. On the other hand, when an individual works with other members, he not only finishes the duty but also learns something about cooperation. So, they aim to learn things for future in their lives. Besides, because our project has both a lecture and a presentation, we can handle it much easily.

In conclusion, according to these reasons, I am interested in working in a group of three to be successful and get the best mark for it.

Revised Celpip 10 -12 response

Personally, I believe a work team in such vital projects is more fruitful for anyone instead of being individual. Although for some pupils it is far better to do it solitarily, I certainly prefer to get involved in a group of three with my classmates due to some reasons.

To begin, regardless of what the research field seems to be, working in groups fosters the spirit among participants, therefore, they are clearly saving more energy to create much enthusiasm to cope with the task efficiently, ensuring the team can cope with even the longest projects, including both the oral lecture and online research.

Moreover, as the project includes a 15-minute presentation, which I guess is the most complicated section, in a three - member group, we are able to easily divide the duties and concentrate on our own parts effectively, without being puzzled!

Considering these mentioned reasons, I can confess working in a group is much better, completing the project successfully.